I’m not sure if you’ll like or dislike this comment, but it reminds me of old school game music. Your style seems to include a lot of the elements in leads and their chords and melodies that occurred in a lot of older games. I liked a lot of that old music, by the way!
While I dislike heavily repetitive music (tried to get into Daft Punk but was irritated by the long length and/or general lack of change in most songs, aside from other matters). However, your sections in this track feel very rushed, as if they are there one moment and gone another. Lengthening them a little, possibly quadrupling, would make them feel more whole instead of being fleeting. Repetitive songs can get boring, but songs that don’t let each section focus can also sound short and sections don’t stand out.
Change is still needed in sections, in my opinion, however only minor ones, like changed notes, maybe an added arpeggiator, or something like that, to keep interest, but to keep the theme standing out and being heard.
Hope this helps! My advice comes from a relatively non-active music-writer, so take with several grains of salt!
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