as your signature declares, this is techybreakcore, and for me your tune is probably a pretty good expression of the genre.
i find the strings and perhaps some of the other sounds a little flat/thin – like they could be spiced up a bit with some eq, reverb and delays.. 😯
the overall energy of the piece is great – IMHO you’re close to achieving the sound you’re going for – but i’m no expert.
years ago I used to listen to a lot of tunes off the Moving Shadow label, as well as LTJ Bukem….
keep on keeping on
🙂